Merkin Posted January 31, 2015 Report Share Posted January 31, 2015 A most delightful whimsy, bolstered by a mother we all can love. http://www.awesomedude.com/dabeagle/the-right-one/the-right-one.htm Link to comment
Bruin Fisher Posted January 31, 2015 Report Share Posted January 31, 2015 Absolutely delightful story, loved it loved it loved it. What a wonderful mother... Link to comment
JamesSavik Posted January 31, 2015 Report Share Posted January 31, 2015 Ryder Tipton is the sort of person I would like to beat into tomato paste, pour into a bucket and hand to the cops. What he did is just so hateful. If I ever caught someone doing that, if someone didn't stop me, I'd probably kill them. Link to comment
Paul Wren Posted January 31, 2015 Report Share Posted January 31, 2015 I loved the mother, and the boys - with respect to Ryder Tipton, can I join the queue after James. Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted January 31, 2015 Report Share Posted January 31, 2015 I stayed very still and knew I could not sleep like this. . . . Oh, well, sleep is overrated. Corbin is a great kid. Three cheers for him standing up to Gramps. Mom is a treasure. R Link to comment
Nigel Gordon Posted January 31, 2015 Report Share Posted January 31, 2015 Mother should be given a medal, Corbin should get one to for standing up to Ryder Tipton. Incidentally I grew up in the area of England known as The Black Country. Tipton is one of the Black Country towns and it was regarded as an insult to call someone a Tipton. Link to comment
Graeme Posted February 1, 2015 Report Share Posted February 1, 2015 That was a wonderful read. One of things I enjoyed (beside's Corbin's mother, and his interactions with Declan) was the way the teenagers didn't have a problem with someone being gay. It can over as no big deal to them, which is exactly the way it should be. Link to comment
Guest RBartlett Posted February 1, 2015 Report Share Posted February 1, 2015 Ryder Tipton is the sort of person I would like to beat into tomato paste, pour into a bucket and hand to the cops. What he did is just so hateful. If I ever caught someone doing that, if someone didn't stop me, I'd probably kill them. What are the cops going to do with a bucket of tomato paste? Drop him off at Pizzahut. Link to comment
Guest Dabeagle Posted February 1, 2015 Report Share Posted February 1, 2015 We've been watching re-runs of Roseanne on Netflix, that's what was peaking to me when I wrote his mother. Can you hear that cackle? Thank you for the kind words, I'm grateful you enjoyed it and humbled you remember to tell me. Link to comment
DesDownunder Posted February 3, 2015 Report Share Posted February 3, 2015 An absolutely charming story. It really captured the moments of first times, and delightfully awkward family situations. Link to comment
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