Paul Wren Posted August 15, 2014 Report Share Posted August 15, 2014 The problem with a new author is that you never no where they are going to be taking you. With the established authors you have a feel for their writing and a sense where their stories are going, though they often give you a nasty shock and go somewhere completely different. This is the first story that Ryan has posted to AD and it is difficult to sense where the author is going with it. One thing though we can be sure of he is going somewhere and wherever it is the signs are it is going to be interesting. I look forward to seeing what is going to come next. Quote Link to comment
Lugnutz Posted August 15, 2014 Report Share Posted August 15, 2014 If the first two chapters are any indication, this will not be boring. Quote Link to comment
Bruin Fisher Posted August 16, 2014 Report Share Posted August 16, 2014 Ooh chapter three is up. I've been following this story with interest. It's well-written and on an intriguing theme. I'm reminded of the TV series Kyle XY, and also a short story of mine that I wrote a while ago (honest) and which will appear here at AD sometime soon. I really like this kind of story and am on the edge of my seat to know how it develops. A great introduction to the work of an author new to AD - another great storyteller joins the ranks! Quote Link to comment
Nigel Gordon Posted August 16, 2014 Report Share Posted August 16, 2014 This is a story which has captivated me from the start, I have no idea where it is going or how it is going to get there but I intend to read along and find out. Quote Link to comment
FreeThinker Posted August 16, 2014 Report Share Posted August 16, 2014 Yes! This is a great story. I love the characters and the setting. Quote Link to comment
Guest RBartlett Posted August 16, 2014 Report Share Posted August 16, 2014 Awwww, thanks guys! I'm really glad you're enjoying it! Quote Link to comment
colinian Posted August 17, 2014 Report Share Posted August 17, 2014 An excellent, enthralling, entertaining story. Where's chapter 4???? Colin Quote Link to comment
Guest RBartlett Posted August 20, 2014 Report Share Posted August 20, 2014 An excellent, enthralling, entertaining story. Where's chapter 4???? Colin It's available today! Quote Link to comment
Lugnutz Posted August 20, 2014 Report Share Posted August 20, 2014 The condrum continues. Chapter 5? Quote Link to comment
Guest RBartlett Posted August 20, 2014 Report Share Posted August 20, 2014 The condrum continues. Chapter 5? Saturday. It's 16 chapters in total. Quote Link to comment
Lugnutz Posted August 21, 2014 Report Share Posted August 21, 2014 Nice. Just getting started then. Quote Link to comment
Cynus Posted August 22, 2014 Report Share Posted August 22, 2014 I am loving this. I can't wait to see where it goes. Quote Link to comment
colinian Posted August 22, 2014 Report Share Posted August 22, 2014 I'm thoroughly enjoying the story. Colin Quote Link to comment
Camy Posted August 22, 2014 Report Share Posted August 22, 2014 I'm thoroughly enjoying the story. Colin Ditto! Quote Link to comment
TalonRider Posted August 22, 2014 Report Share Posted August 22, 2014 I think we have a definite winner here. Quote Link to comment
Merkin Posted August 23, 2014 Report Share Posted August 23, 2014 The ultimate test of teenager impulse control. Quote Link to comment
JamesSavik Posted August 25, 2014 Report Share Posted August 25, 2014 Even the finicky likes it. Quote Link to comment
Lugnutz Posted October 1, 2014 Report Share Posted October 1, 2014 I like the next chapter link at the end of a chapter. Don't lose your mojo that way instead of closing tabs and go to the chapter list. BTW, it is done with more for the future. http://www.awesomedude.com/ryan-bartlett/my-secret-identity/index.htm Quote Link to comment
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